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是誰要聽的呢 ?
如果是台灣人要聽的, 你可能得用 "台灣式英文", 要是美國或英語系國家的主試官, 你得用標準的商業英文.

我不會台灣式英文, 所以你自己挑吧.

Ladies & gentlemen ( 沒人在面試的時候像中文一樣講各級主管的 ).

It's my pleasure to be invited for this interview.
My name is XXX, I am XX years old, live in XX county, married, with parents and two beautiful children. ( 你講你已婚, 就表示你有老婆了, 就不用廢話一堆了, 事實上, 除非很特殊狀況, 一般面試不應該管你幾歲或者是已婚未婚幾個小孩, 不過你要講, 就幫你翻了, 只是很不合當而已. )
My personal interests are singing, playing basketball and bowling. I have been in the company for 8 years. Two years ago, I was transfer from XX department for XX department. Because this extraordinary experience, I have learned the relationships among all departments and the conflicts in between. Therefore, I am confident I can handle cross-functional projects with ease internally, and satisfy the needs from our customers.

Certainly, I understand I have to improve my communication ability in English, after all, this is an international company, English is the key to assure our success. Thank you for your time.

( OK, 這最後一段基本上會毀掉你的機會, 如果我是你的話, 我不會這樣講我的 30-second pitch... )

如果是我的話, 我的30秒自我介紹會是..

Good morning ( afternoon ) everyone, I thank you for your time meeting me, I am very excited for this opportunity to briefly introduce myself.

My name is XXX, I have joined this company for more than 8 years.
In the past 8 years, I have been in various roles and worked in different departments. The experience I have gained during this time, have enabled me to understand the relationships among all different departments and the potential conflict that come in between. Therefore, I am confident I can handle cross-functional projects easily and make sure all the requirements from our respective customers can be met.

While English is important to our company, I believe my experience, enthusiasms and motivation, will be great assets for this position and I certainly will continue to improve my English ability to meet the challenge that may come.

Thank you.

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這是我最簡單的版本. 你自己挑吧.

參考資料 Working in the US for more than 10 years, in American company.
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